I have played both courses twice with no issues to this point. I will try practicing from areas around the greens on both courses to see if I find anything. As a couple of courses that I have played several times in real life, I think you did a fantastic job. If I can dial up Monterey Bay "summertime conditions" of 12 degrees C, 30 mph winds and inconsistent green speeds, it would play like real life.
Very nice Sage, I used to live in Folsom, CA up near Sacramento. I used to take a few 3 day weekends a year to hop down to Monterey and play golf. I loved these two courses in Seaside, Poppy Hills (after it was redesigned), and Pacific Grove (at least the back 9). They were affordable with the Northern CA Golf Association discount.
I played Pacific Grove around 2007 and had the honor of having my snack stolen out of my cart on #10 by one of those sea gulls! Really beautiful course, but they were punching the back nine fairways at the time. I loved the beautiful cypress trees on the front nine, and all the colorful elephant grass on the back nine! With nearby Pebble, all I could afford to do was pull my car to the side on about #15 and walk over and look at it. gorgeous area, though!